This thread is for the discussion of everything related to this weeks theme and submitted stories. Be it a critique, suggestion, or just general chat about your favorite submission.
Also feel free to post other stories you were thinking of submitting or other ideas you had around this weeks theme.
Oh my… basically my story is finished but this time the wordcount caught up with me.
I have 824 words ready, shall I post it or must I weed out a bit? (removed a paragraph with about 50 words already sigh)
i would not mind i mean i went to over 50 exact for one of the upcoming ones.
i cant wait to post mine for the next 3 weeks. they are link together pretty good i think
Thank you very much. You are completely right I do have to work on providing a better readable flow, especially changes of pace tend to throw me off track.
Hopefully throughout the competition I will be able to improve more and more through feedback like yours!