Writer’s Workshop Discussion. Cycle 1, Week 4 - FINALS


#1

If you want to submit your stories then please head on over here.

This thread is for the discussion of everything related to this weeks theme and submitted stories. Be it a critique, suggestion, or just general chat about your favorite submission.

Also feel free to post other stories you were thinking of submitting or other ideas you had around this weeks theme.


#3

Dibs on the name Kayla for the geomanceress :smile:


#4

guess im waiting for next week to try again


#5

yes, this week is for the finalists… @CableX17, @PDanford, @voxel_pirate and @RoseyNineOneOne

but please do check the new theme schedule, and see which theme(s) you like! :smiley:


#6

Oh my… basically my story is finished but this time the wordcount caught up with me.
I have 824 words ready, shall I post it or must I weed out a bit? (removed a paragraph with about 50 words already sigh)


#7

i hate to feel like i’m stifling creativity! would folks (readers and submitters alike) object to 1k words for the finals?


#8

If the others agree that would be neat, then I could even keep the other paragraph :slight_smile:

Man I am so eager to post LOL


#9

i would not mind i mean i went to over 50 exact for one of the upcoming ones.
i cant wait to post mine for the next 3 weeks. they are link together pretty good i think


#10

go ahead, for the finals we’ll bump to 1k… :+1:


#11

I am so excited about how this piece will be received, this competition is huge fun!!!


#12

@PDanford i like the story but at times it was hard to understand but again good job and i like the ending


#13

Whats up with @CableX17 and @RoseyNineOneOne? We are two stories short (see what I did there?)!


#14

putting the finishing touches on their respective masterpieces, no doubt… :wink:


#15

Thank you very much. You are completely right I do have to work on providing a better readable flow, especially changes of pace tend to throw me off track.
Hopefully throughout the competition I will be able to improve more and more through feedback like yours! :hear_no_evil: :wink:


#16

you know i cant wait to get back in this. im already to go for the next 2 weeks


#17

excellent! we’ll be opening up cycle 2 in the next few days… :smiley:


#18

Wasn’t sure how to write for this one. Ehhh… this’ll have to do. Enjoy.


#19

Somehow not all too many people vote… ah well this makes the outcome even more exciting :four_leaf_clover:


#20

i’m trying my best to wait until the end before reading the submissions… trying


#21

Just realized I might have killed the word count. We did change it for the finals, right? :dizzy_face:

Edit: @SteveAdamo… in case that wasn’t obvious enough.