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Wow, can’t believe I missed this. I’m really glad you are still “pumping” out fan fictions. Unfortunately I cannot read/give critique on your latest work for some time. I am about to embark on a cross country trip and will not have time to give it a full read through. When I get back (roughly 3-4 weeks) I will gladly tell you my thoughts.
-Turtlesquish
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I wish you safe travels!! 
Ugh, the cliff hanger! I loved the story, nice unexpected story twist (even if the non-existent fight with the lord was a little anti-climactic)
A very enjoyable read, thanks a lot!
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I’ll try my best to make part 3 not to end in a cliffhanger. 
No promises, though.
Thank you for reading! I’m so glad you liked it. 
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