Writer's Workshop 3: The Wrath of Mer!

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very nicely done @Newf! :+1:

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I struggled a bit with how short it needed to be. If it is possible, next time I request a larger word cap.

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yeah, we always seem to go back and forth on word count… but I think yours was easy to read and I think it might lend to more participation…

perhaps this round can bleed into the next? with this first being the “character/situation setup” and round two being the finale? :wink:

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I was thinking of having Jack come back. This time hunting for the goblin chieftain who killed his brother.

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A little bit different, but I hope you folks enjoy it!

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wow, you guys are going for dark an ominous, aren’t you! :smile: :+1:

well done!

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@Heilari, if we both make it to the next round, perhaps our main characters could duke it out?

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Sure, why not? What’s the worst that could happen?

mind quickly envisions several horrible outcomes

:frowning:

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I don’t care if my character dies on 2 conditions,

He has to look badass before dieing,

He has to die in the most gruesome way possible.

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Where do we upload our stories? I’ve had a neat idea for Rabbit-people vs Kobold tunnel warfare that I’ve been meaning to put to text.

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sorry, I suppose I should update the OP accordingly:

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Damn it @Teleros, stop making it harder for me to earn a title!

All in all though, good story.

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People do like goblins it seems :slight_smile:

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They’re the only enemy in the game so far, you don’t get much choice. Although @Hieronymous did do trees.

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hahaha… it was quite the entertaining entry though, wasn’t it? :smile: :+1:

loved all the cameos!! and really pleased at the excellent turnout so far…

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Conflict could be two soldiers talking about who is going to take which watch. Conflict doesn’t necessarily mean that you beat each other up. @SteveAdamo just created the possibility to make combat scenes :slight_smile:

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Indeed.

To quote:

Nothing there that says it has to be gory combat :wink: . Just conflict / struggle re Stonehearth. Heck, you could probably do a passionate debate amongst the devs on how to implement a feature :smiley: .

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I was thinking of making a story with two guards discussing about who should stand guard at the stone stockpile and which should stand at the wood stockpile. :smiley:

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Is this going to be a Jack Sparrow type thing and a goblin runs off with the wood and stone anyway?

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I think the stockpiles are looted when they arrive :stuck_out_tongue: (If the story progress that long)

@Silas really like the concept of the story :smiley: I already feel bad for my Heartlings

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