# Writer’s Workshop Discussion. Cycle 4, Week 2

**URL:** <https://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-discussion-cycle-4-week-2/3218>\
**Category:** Fan Media\
**Created:** [October 10, 2013, 4:40pm UTC](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-discussion-cycle-4-week-2/3218 "2013-10-10T16:40:22Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 11\
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**Author:** ![SteveAdamo](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex022/user_avatar/discourse.stonehearth.net/steveadamo/32/13955_2.png) [@SteveAdamo](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/u/SteveAdamo)\
**Post date:** [October 10, 2013, 4:40pm UTC](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-discussion-cycle-4-week-2/3218/1 "2013-10-10T16:40:23Z")

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If you want to submit your stories then please [**head on over here**](http://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-submissions-cycle-4-week-2/3217).

This thread is for the discussion of everything related to this weeks theme and submitted stories. Be it a critique, suggestion, or just general chat about your favorite submission.

Also feel free to post other stories you were thinking of submitting or other ideas you had around this weeks theme. If you have new ideas for competition themes, you can submit those [**right here**](http://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writers-workshop-theme-bank/2457/).

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**Author:** ![Smokestacks](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/97f17d/32.png) [@Smokestacks](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/u/Smokestacks)\
**Post date:** [October 10, 2013, 5:05pm UTC](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-discussion-cycle-4-week-2/3218/3 "2013-10-10T17:05:46Z")

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I’m curious what came into other people’s heads when they read ‘The Burning’…something kind of Salem Witch Trials-y?

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**Author:** ![SteveAdamo](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex022/user_avatar/discourse.stonehearth.net/steveadamo/32/13955_2.png) [@SteveAdamo](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/u/SteveAdamo)\
**Post date:** [October 10, 2013, 5:26pm UTC](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-discussion-cycle-4-week-2/3218/4 "2013-10-10T17:26:50Z")

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with the cycles steam-punk theme, this would go quite nicely… 👍

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**Author:** ![naturalnuke](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex022/user_avatar/discourse.stonehearth.net/naturalnuke/32/14017_2.png) [@naturalnuke](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/u/naturalnuke)\
**Post date:** [October 11, 2013, 1:07am UTC](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-discussion-cycle-4-week-2/3218/5 "2013-10-11T01:07:08Z")

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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand done.

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**Author:** ![SteveAdamo](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex022/user_avatar/discourse.stonehearth.net/steveadamo/32/13955_2.png) [@SteveAdamo](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/u/SteveAdamo)\
**Post date:** [October 11, 2013, 1:19am UTC](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-discussion-cycle-4-week-2/3218/6 "2013-10-11T01:19:30Z")

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> [@naturalnuke](#):
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> done

nice use of a wombat!

bet you never thought you would receive praise like that, eh? 😄

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**Author:** ![naturalnuke](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex022/user_avatar/discourse.stonehearth.net/naturalnuke/32/14017_2.png) [@naturalnuke](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/u/naturalnuke)\
**Post date:** [October 11, 2013, 1:23am UTC](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-discussion-cycle-4-week-2/3218/7 "2013-10-11T01:23:43Z")

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hehe 😸 no I did not

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**Author:** ![naturalnuke](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex022/user_avatar/discourse.stonehearth.net/naturalnuke/32/14017_2.png) [@naturalnuke](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/u/naturalnuke)\
**Post date:** [October 14, 2013, 8:03pm UTC](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-discussion-cycle-4-week-2/3218/8 "2013-10-14T20:03:46Z")

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So no one could think of anything?

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**Author:** ![SteveAdamo](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex022/user_avatar/discourse.stonehearth.net/steveadamo/32/13955_2.png) [@SteveAdamo](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/u/SteveAdamo)\
**Post date:** [October 15, 2013, 1:47am UTC](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-discussion-cycle-4-week-2/3218/9 "2013-10-15T01:47:32Z")

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> [@naturalnuke](#):
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> So no one could think of anything?

you mean as far as a critique of your writing, or what vibe they get from the theme? 😃

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**Author:** ![naturalnuke](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex022/user_avatar/discourse.stonehearth.net/naturalnuke/32/14017_2.png) [@naturalnuke](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/u/naturalnuke)\
**Post date:** [October 15, 2013, 6:03am UTC](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-discussion-cycle-4-week-2/3218/10 "2013-10-15T06:03:42Z")

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The vibe of the theme not fitting with what most people wrote.

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**Author:** ![SteveAdamo](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex022/user_avatar/discourse.stonehearth.net/steveadamo/32/13955_2.png) [@SteveAdamo](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/u/SteveAdamo)\
**Post date:** [October 17, 2013, 1:45pm UTC](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-discussion-cycle-4-week-2/3218/11 "2013-10-17T13:45:30Z")

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well, congratulations to @naturalnuke and @Atralane for winning this weeks competition… it was a heated battle! 😄

week 3’s competition will be open soon… 👍

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**Author:** ![SteveAdamo](https://sea2.discourse-cdn.com/flex022/user_avatar/discourse.stonehearth.net/steveadamo/32/13955_2.png) [@SteveAdamo](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/u/SteveAdamo)\
**Post date:** [October 17, 2013, 1:51pm UTC](https://discourse.stonehearth.net/t/writer-s-workshop-discussion-cycle-4-week-2/3218/12 "2013-10-17T13:51:50Z")

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